His
sketch:
He always sat there on that
bench-waiting for a passerby, who was willing to pay to get himself sketched.
He was always ready with his weapons. By the daytime, he would sit there and
sleep on the same bench at night.
He had some money with him
and managed his activities with whatever he got from the value of his skills.
He often looked shabby, long beard, torn clothes; in short-a vagabond.
That evening, a beautiful
woman walked down the street. The artist called out to her- “Excuse me mam!”
She looked at the man lying
on the bench. “Yes?”
He took his sketches and
sprinted down to her. Showing her his sketches-“Mam! If you’d like to get
sketched.”
She looked into his eyes. He
looked into hers. There was a moment of silence- “alright” – she agreed.
She sat down on the bench, as
he adjusted his board and put up the paper. He sharpened his pencils, and was
ready to go.
He was real serious about his
work. He didn’t speak. He looked at her and then at the board. He was a
complete professional. She felt the awkward silence pinch her. She wanted to
break that silence desperately.
“So you’re from this place
only?” -She asked.
“No!”- he said, still so
engrossed in his work.
She expected him to talk to
her, but he didn’t.
“Then where?”
“reglanze!”
“alright! But I’ve heard that
it’s real far away from this place. Then how come you’re here?” she asked,
willing to give some momentum to the conversation.
“I wanted to be as far as
possible from that place.”
“May I ask why?”
He looked at her and gave a
little smirk.
“Here! Its ready!! Have a
look…..”
She stood up from the
position she’d gotten so used to and went close to him. She looked at the
sketch. It was good but not born of a professional’s hands.
“Superb! This is great!”
She asked how much that was
for and gave him the money. He happily tucked it into his pocket.
“So can I sit down here with
you for some more time?”
“Alright!”
And they both went and sat
down.
“So you said you wanted to be
as far as possible. Why?”
“I was cheated upon by my
partner.”
“Partner?”
“Ya! My business partner! We
had this small company that designed graphics for the local companies. The man
was selfish, impulsive and even violent at times- but he was my childhood
friend too. And he’d always been gentle with me atleast. We were doing well
together.”
He paused.
“Then?”
He continued slowly- “he fell
in love with my wife.”
“O I’m really sorry!”
“I don’t even know if that
was love, but he wanted her, and my wife told me
her fantasies about this man. Can you believe this?? My own wife talking
about this other man! I didn’t know what to do. I couldn’t have been aggressive
like him. Before I could think of anything, he took
control. He cheated on me- my business partner. He took all finances
under his control and kicked me out of the company we’d built. I took whatever
cash I had with me and had to run away from the place. I ran, and I ran and one day I woke up here. I don’t know how much time
has passed since then but I like it here!”
Tears in his eyes, he sat
there with her.
She held his hands and
caressed them gently. His eyes looked at her. He moved towards her and they
kissed. His hands cupped her face and she gently rubbed his back as their lips
glided smoothly over each other’s.
He got up as soon as they
stopped.
“You
want to see how that bastard who spoilt my life looked like?”
She was not sure about what
he was saying. She couldn’t think of anything else to do, so she nodded.
He jumped up to his board and
was at work instantaneously. He was completely involved in it and some external
power had taken control.
He didn’t blink and his hands
didn’t stop until he was done.
He held her hand, picked her
up and brought her to the sketch.
She looked at the sketch.
She kept looking at the sketch as he impatiently
waited for an answer. His eyes glittered and his heart was pumping faster than
ever- he was moving about like an impatient child.
“Why?” Her
nervous mouth spoke- “But! But that’s you!”
“Me? Are you crazy? That’s
him. The bastard who cheated on me. That violent bastard who took my wife away
from me.”
He was shouting as hard as
possible and he was sweating and his hands shivered. “I lost her because of
him. This man! This very man! And he fainted as he spoke those last words.”
Holding her tears back, she
shouted- “stop running away from yourself mike! Stop doing that!”
And she walked out of the bedroom, with her face
hiding behind her trembling hands.……….
By
Siddhant Gupta
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ReplyDeleteI love it..!
hi tanvi! thank u sooooo much!!!
ReplyDeleteyo sid awesome it was..!!
ReplyDeletehmm quite an emotional guy u r..
thannnnnnks a lot garima!!! emotional... ya!even i guess so...:):):)
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